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From: "Zach O'Keefe" <zokeefe@google.com>
To: Alejandro Colomar <alx.manpages@gmail.com>
Cc: Michael Kerrisk <mtk.manpages@gmail.com>,
	Yang Shi <shy828301@gmail.com>,
	linux-mm@kvack.org,  linux-man@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH man-pages 2/4] madvise.2: document reliable probe for advice support
Date: Tue, 18 Oct 2022 11:30:45 -0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <CAAa6QmRghdBvHv43LoekXCzEhf8yE=CK-atgty=Y0nxDSoh83A@mail.gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <30f2b019-1dbd-dbb8-e6f5-a1c2c9f3a979@gmail.com>

On Tue, Oct 18, 2022 at 11:04 AM Alejandro Colomar
<alx.manpages@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hey Zach!
>
> On 10/18/22 19:53, Zach O'Keefe wrote:
> > Hey Alex,
> >
> >>> diff --git a/man2/madvise.2 b/man2/madvise.2
> >>> index e14e0f7fb..adfe24c24 100644
> >>> --- a/man2/madvise.2
> >>> +++ b/man2/madvise.2
> >>> @@ -789,6 +789,13 @@ that are not mapped, the Linux version of
> >>>    ignores them and applies the call to the rest (but returns
> >>>    .B ENOMEM
> >>>    from the system call, as it should).
> >>> +.PP
> >>> +.BR madvise (0,
> >>> +0,
> >>> +.IR advice )
> >>
> >> For expressions, we don't follow the same highlighting rules as in
> >> identifiers and man-page references.  Instead we use all italics.  See
> >> man-pages(7):
> >>
> >>          Expressions, if not written on a separate indented  line,
> >>          should  be  specified in italics.  Again, the use of non‐
> >>          breaking spaces may be appropriate if the  expression  is
> >>          inlined with normal text.
> >
> > Just to confirm, by "expression", you mean "madvise(0, 0, advice)"?
>
> Yes, I meant that.
>
> > If
> > so, to be consistent with the other note, perhaps best to break this
> > into a phrase such as:
> >
> > --8<---
> > .BR madvise ()
> > called with zero for both
> > .IR addr
> > and
> > .IR length
> > will return zero iff
> > .I advice
> > is supported by the kernel and can be relied on to probe for support.
> > --8<---
>
> I think the C expression was more readable.

SGTM - will update for v2.  Appreciate your help here!

Best,
Zach


  reply	other threads:[~2022-10-18 18:31 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 15+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-10-17 17:55 [PATCH 0/4] Add MADV_COLLAPSE documentation Zach OKeefe
2022-10-17 17:55 ` [PATCH man-pages 1/4] madvise.2: update THP file/shmem documentation for +5.4 Zach OKeefe
2022-10-18 10:32   ` Alex Colomar
2022-10-18 16:52     ` Zach O'Keefe
2022-10-17 17:55 ` [PATCH man-pages 2/4] madvise.2: document reliable probe for advice support Zach OKeefe
2022-10-18 10:36   ` Alex Colomar
2022-10-18 17:53     ` Zach O'Keefe
2022-10-18 18:04       ` Alejandro Colomar
2022-10-18 18:30         ` Zach O'Keefe [this message]
2022-10-17 17:55 ` [PATCH man-pages 3/4] process_madvise.2: CAP_SYS_ADMIN cleanup Zach OKeefe
2022-10-18 10:38   ` Alex Colomar
2022-10-18 21:22     ` Zach O'Keefe
2022-10-17 17:55 ` [PATCH man-pages 4/4] madvise.2: add documentation for MADV_COLLAPSE Zach OKeefe
2022-10-18 10:47   ` Alex Colomar
2022-10-18 21:54     ` Zach O'Keefe

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