From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-8.6 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIM_INVALID, DKIM_SIGNED,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,NICE_REPLY_A, SIGNED_OFF_BY,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS,URIBL_BLOCKED,USER_AGENT_SANE_1 autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CACCAC433E7 for ; Thu, 3 Sep 2020 00:19:53 +0000 (UTC) Received: from kanga.kvack.org (kanga.kvack.org [205.233.56.17]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8469120758 for ; Thu, 3 Sep 2020 00:19:53 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: mail.kernel.org; dkim=fail reason="signature verification failed" (2048-bit key) header.d=infradead.org header.i=@infradead.org header.b="DJVpw/6/" DMARC-Filter: OpenDMARC Filter v1.3.2 mail.kernel.org 8469120758 Authentication-Results: mail.kernel.org; dmarc=none (p=none dis=none) header.from=infradead.org Authentication-Results: mail.kernel.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=owner-linux-mm@kvack.org Received: by kanga.kvack.org (Postfix) id 18ED06B005A; Wed, 2 Sep 2020 20:19:53 -0400 (EDT) Received: by kanga.kvack.org (Postfix, from userid 40) id 13F0C6B005C; Wed, 2 Sep 2020 20:19:53 -0400 (EDT) X-Delivered-To: int-list-linux-mm@kvack.org Received: by kanga.kvack.org (Postfix, from userid 63042) id 02CEA6B0072; Wed, 2 Sep 2020 20:19:52 -0400 (EDT) X-Delivered-To: linux-mm@kvack.org Received: from forelay.hostedemail.com (smtprelay0108.hostedemail.com [216.40.44.108]) by kanga.kvack.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E1F2F6B005A for ; Wed, 2 Sep 2020 20:19:52 -0400 (EDT) Received: from smtpin23.hostedemail.com (10.5.19.251.rfc1918.com [10.5.19.251]) by forelay01.hostedemail.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9F5BD180AD806 for ; Thu, 3 Sep 2020 00:19:52 +0000 (UTC) X-FDA: 77219842224.23.leaf87_430b1f2270a5 Received: from filter.hostedemail.com (10.5.16.251.rfc1918.com [10.5.16.251]) by smtpin23.hostedemail.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6E4C737606 for ; Thu, 3 Sep 2020 00:19:52 +0000 (UTC) X-HE-Tag: leaf87_430b1f2270a5 X-Filterd-Recvd-Size: 2780 Received: from casper.infradead.org (casper.infradead.org [90.155.50.34]) by imf30.hostedemail.com (Postfix) with ESMTP for ; Thu, 3 Sep 2020 00:19:52 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; q=dns/txt; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=infradead.org; s=casper.20170209; h=Content-Transfer-Encoding:Content-Type: In-Reply-To:MIME-Version:Date:Message-ID:From:References:Cc:To:Subject:Sender :Reply-To:Content-ID:Content-Description; bh=jG/anSY/5LJ9ebMkKbHQcu0NPrstmMT3teYNar15g7Q=; b=DJVpw/6/EjS/5Vi1TOx+P43hi+ 0Mb1VKZRuV+VtEiaMix6/Y+oL6zpiQ+Wq4JKmC3q3d+2ltYN0Xr0HV1JlKRwBZBPx5r1sZuA5NMQO /wrIn6znnWnAJybMIoWNQB5tIMA/T7fGnumSHne7ZtRXvnODdkzl/7fscOpgYOlhTbRAsQbcNrDik 6YXPz5P5IYAzTH1t/prwtfaMsYUU/AwzDpf5rfKWxqw6p+yvO5mb2tBlyLJXRhXnXHeKlblG2fB7F iT+rzfid4z19fEqaz21dzyEIatotU3wpswJrm5o12uItiZZQBDnZe86q93bcM4AyVMKXL55bXSax4 ZwWUywKA==; Received: from [2601:1c0:6280:3f0::19c2] by casper.infradead.org with esmtpsa (Exim 4.92.3 #3 (Red Hat Linux)) id 1kDchN-0008UX-J1; Thu, 03 Sep 2020 00:01:54 +0000 Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] mm/doc: editorial pass on page migration To: Ralph Campbell , linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Cc: Anshuman Khandual , Jonathan Corbet , Andrew Morton References: <20200902225247.15213-1-rcampbell@nvidia.com> From: Randy Dunlap Message-ID: <8def6c20-0efe-99f3-bde3-3e49f1456112@infradead.org> Date: Wed, 2 Sep 2020 17:01:49 -0700 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:68.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/68.11.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <20200902225247.15213-1-rcampbell@nvidia.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Language: en-US Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 6E4C737606 X-Spamd-Result: default: False [0.00 / 100.00] X-Rspamd-Server: rspam05 X-Bogosity: Ham, tests=bogofilter, spamicity=0.000000, version=1.2.4 Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org Precedence: bulk X-Loop: owner-majordomo@kvack.org List-ID: On 9/2/20 3:52 PM, Ralph Campbell wrote: > Add Sphinx reference links to HMM and CPUSETS, and numerous small > editorial changes to make the page_migration.rst document more readable. > > Signed-off-by: Ralph Campbell Reviewed-by: Randy Dunlap Thanks. > --- > > The patch applies cleanly to the latest linux or linux-mm tree. > Since this is MM relatated, perhaps Andrew Morton would like to > take this into the linux-mm tree. > > Changes in v2: > Applied suggestions from Randy Dunlap: > Replace outdated ftp:// link to https://github > Changed "off node" to "off-node" and "non-lru" to "non-LRU" > > .../admin-guide/cgroup-v1/cpusets.rst | 2 + > Documentation/vm/hmm.rst | 2 +- > Documentation/vm/page_migration.rst | 164 +++++++++--------- > 3 files changed, 87 insertions(+), 81 deletions(-) > -- ~Randy